M4- Mode of address and structure

The article that I wrote was done for the school magazine to try and display the dangers and how big the scale that online bullying has become

The article that I have done is for I have tried to aim for my target audience. The target audience that am aiming for is between the ages or 11-18 years old of both genders as it has been made for a high school magazine.This is meant that I have had to pick suitable language that would be used by a student which would make the article more reliable and would take more interest in the article. I didn't want to use language that they wouldn't understand because if they didn't understand the language then they would give up with the article. This might make them feel that they are not talking to them like a friend but they are talking to them like they are talking down to them.

I have made my article look very professional. I have done this by the way that I have put my words into two columns I have done this because it looks like a lot of the other articles that I have seen. This makes it look very professional. This will be important because if it doesn't look like a normal article then people are going to take one look at the article and not want to read. what I have also done for my presentation is broke the big article down in smaller paragraphs. This is good because then when people see the article they will read it because it doesn't look long an boring and people will read on. I made sure that the first paragraph that I have wrote was interesting and made people want to read on.

In my article I have used quotes from people throughout the article I have used a lot of percentages that I have I collected. one way that I collected the percentages was through using my secondary sources. This allowed me to use the percentages that they had collected to back up the points I had made. Another way that I have used percentages is through my primary research because I was able to use the answers that i got and turn them into percentages

The ways that I will distribute my article will be using print based methods and also using online methods. By doing this it will allow me to reach a bigger audience. If the article is placed online it will help the article to reach more people because they will be able to share it with each other and then they will share it and that cycle will just keep going on. distributing it via print is good because it means that they will be able to give it around the school to make sure that it gets to the right people.

P6- Sub-editing

P5- draft

For my title and I have used a rhetorical question. This is good for the article because this will draw in people to read my article. It will all so also get the people that are reading the article to think about the how safe they are currently online. This will be mean that they will want to read on and see what could be dangerous. 

In the article I have used statistics throughout. I have done this so that they will know that I have done my research. This is good because it shows the reader that I am a reliable source and that the article is trustworthy 

I have spilt my article down in small paragraphs because then It makes the article a lot easier to read. This is also good because if people look at the article and just see one long paragraph they may not want to read it but if it is split up then people are more likely to read the whole thing. 

The way that I have wrote the article suits the way that I want the article for. It suits the school magazine with the way that it is done. 

P4 & M3

For my primary research I did a questionnaire with a few members of the target audience that I am aiming for. 



These are the answers to my questionnaire. I did this because I believed that it was this was the most effective way of getting the information that I needed from the audience that I wanted. I choice this over a focus group because I thought that if I was in a focus group that other peoples opinion might effect there answers. This is good because they can do it on there own and don't have anyone there to effect there answers.

The answers that I got where very interesting because this meant that I was able to look at what I wanted to write about. This allowed me to focus on the points that people are most interested and the points that's people don't know about. This is good because it means that the article can focus around these points and tell people interesting facts that they may not have known. the main question that I wanted to focus on was the last question because I needed to see how safe children felt at school and look at if they feel like the school are doing the right things to help out with the problem that is cyber bullying.

secondary sources

For the secondary sources I have used 2 different websites for information. I have picked reliable source. This is important that the it is reliable because then the information that I use for my article is true. It is important that it isn't true because if it isn't true they people wont see the article as reliable and wont want to carry on reading. Another reason that I have used secondary sources is that so I can show other peoples opinions on the matter. This is showing that it isn't just all from my view and other people so that the points that I put forward are proven by other peoples points. I have also made sure that the websites that I have used are from companies that very known. This is good because you know that a range of different people are going to look on this webpage. This is important because I ill not be the only person looking at this website and they will have to make sure it is all correct

Harvard references

NSPCC. (2018). Bullying and cyberbullying. Available: https://www.nspcc.org.uk/preventing-abuse/child-abuse-and-neglect/bullying-and-cyberbullying/bullying-cyberbullying-statistics/ . Last accessed 19/06/2018.

effects of cyber bullying . (2018). effects of cyber bullying . Available: https://www.bullying.co.uk/cyberbullying/effects-of-cyberbullying/ . Last accessed 19/06/2018.